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Ballad for the Birds

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A traditional piece for my 9th grade Language Arts Teacher. She asked for a commission last year, but I could never get the image right. So I scrapped the original design, and created this. I am going to give it to her tomorrow. I hope she likes it!

I am especially proud of this piece. Feedback is very much appreciated, as I want to improve.
Image size
2667x1998px 2.42 MB
Make
NIKON
Model
COOLPIX P500
Shutter Speed
10/130 second
Aperture
F/3.4
Focal Length
4 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
Nov 18, 2012, 11:21:33 AM
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

This piece of art work is truly amazing! The way you drew the bird creatures is stunning and whimsical, yet also creepy in a good way. The girl playing guitar in the center brings a balance to this; I see it as the focal point. And another place I look instantly towards on this picture is the skeletal creature on the bottom right corner. The fact that it has no color is amazing. But what I think it's missing is maybe a little splash of color somewhere? You don't have to take this advice but I think it would be nice to color all the birds eyes some bright color and leave everything else how it is. But overall I cannot complain, this is definitely a lot better than anything I could ever dream of doing! Wonderful idea, wonderful drawing!