uh i dont know how to write a critique, but here goes!
I've honestly been trying to capture the concept of "fall" for awhile now, or in my opinion "things dying and leaves making pretty colors." You've done this very well! The leaves and tentacle-ies curve in a very beautiful pattern and the leaves really draw the viewers attention.
However, a little too much attention may be averted towards the tentacle-ies. the only color in the picture is in the leaves, and the "main piece" of it, or the girl, is not drawn to, although it does help to the feeling of the picture. maybe center it next time?
The text is VERY original and i love it. we've been working on texts for awhile now in my art class and that's something my teacher would've given a 15/10.
the girl trying to resist and the wind winding away anyways nicely contributes to the concept, you can't stop a season.